[Hey, he asked for feedback! Which Hiyori is more than capable of providing, given his career.]
Yep! For that song, anyway. But that could easily be fixed with practice. What can't be fixed so easily is someone's voice—but Elan-kun has a nice one like I thought, so there's no problem there.
[Hiyori's all smiles as he listens to him talk. Something about the song resonated with him, too, huh? Perhaps the rebellious outlook spoke to him after he spent so long being a good boy at his job. But Hiyori won't ask; it's just a song, and those are meant to be enjoyed without thinking about them too hard.]
Well, that's good to hear. Now I know something else that Elan-kun likes, besides "a good view" and "me!" ♪
[Cue an obnoxious wink, before he shrugs in response to that last question.]
I could! Or we could take turns until the food arrives. Whatever Elan-kun wants is fine. But if you're on a roll or you want to prove yourself, by all means, keep singing your heart out ♪
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Yep! For that song, anyway. But that could easily be fixed with practice. What can't be fixed so easily is someone's voice—but Elan-kun has a nice one like I thought, so there's no problem there.
[Hiyori's all smiles as he listens to him talk. Something about the song resonated with him, too, huh? Perhaps the rebellious outlook spoke to him after he spent so long being a good boy at his job. But Hiyori won't ask; it's just a song, and those are meant to be enjoyed without thinking about them too hard.]
Well, that's good to hear. Now I know something else that Elan-kun likes, besides "a good view" and "me!" ♪
[Cue an obnoxious wink, before he shrugs in response to that last question.]
I could! Or we could take turns until the food arrives. Whatever Elan-kun wants is fine. But if you're on a roll or you want to prove yourself, by all means, keep singing your heart out ♪